Essay about Indonesia

I want to tell you about Indonesia. (here is the link to indonesian homepage)

When I went to the United State, I made a really great friend from Indonesia.
She was an exchange students as well.
She is Muslim, and taught me a lot of things about her religion, and Indonesia.

The area of Indonesia is about 190 square kilometers.
The entire population is about two hundred million.
Jakarta is the capital of Indonesia.
They speak Indonesian.

I want to tell you about my favorite singer group called w-inds..
There are three guys in w-inds.; Ryohei, Keita, and Ryuichi.

The first time I saw them on tv was about eight years ago.
My sister was watching w-inds. on one tv show, and asked me which guy do I like.
When I saw them, I just loved how they look, sing, and dance.

I go to their every concerts, and that is the most exciting thing for me.

Before I got to know w-inds., I wasn't very interested in music so much.
But now, I listen to their songs when I'm happy, sad, mad, or whenever I am.

My Favorite Singer

I gonna talk about my favorite singer group, w-inds.!
I have been their fan over 7 years.

movie, Bowling for Columbine

What I wanna write about on essay

・I want to tell you about this movie called “Bowling for Columbine”.
It’s American documentary film written, directed, produced by, and starring Michael Moore.

・He seeks to find out why the Columbine massacre occurred and why there are so many gun murders in the United State.
People say that’s because there are many violent movies, video games, domestic troubles, high unemployment, and violent history. However Japan is ahead in video games, there are more domestic troubles in England, the American unemployment isn’t as high as Canada, and Germany has more violent history.

・In Canada, the gun’s coverage is higher than the United State, but they don’t have gun murders as much as the United State. …….
Moore interviewed some famous people without appointment to find out.


・The interesting part was the interview with Marilyn Manson.He was accused by some people about the Columbine massacre, just because the criminals were listening to his songs. The phrase that Manson said to Moore; “Campaign of Fear and Consumption” is the most suitable phrase about this movie’s question, why there are so many gun murders in the United State.
I think he talked much much better than other voters, especially the guy who is the top of the rifle association? It's funny the person who was accused about that incident talks much better stuff. And his way of thinking, too though. I think that he has the most important point about this movie.

・Many people say that that’s because people in America can get guns easily, and they can have guns. And that’s what I thought, too. So it means it must be related with some culture stuff.

・The director found out it’s about the “Culture of Fear”. America has the culture of fear.
People feel fear and scare, so they buy arms to protect themselves.It’s like this. The American commercial says “If you have bad breath, people are not going to talk to you. So here, you should buy this!” People get scare, and they buy it. So many media show some scary news or commercials on TV. But that’s the American economy is. That’s why they have culture of fear.

・The director says it’s also warning for British people. However here in Japan should think about too.
We can’t have gun, because it’s illegal. But there are gun murders in Japan. Many people have two keys at door, they are getting some crime prevention stuff, parents take their kids cell phone to protect them, and the guards take care about kids to school. Many people know nothing about their neighbors.

・Are we getting the culture of fear little by little? I hope Japanese can noticed something before it’s too late. It’s big and too difficult problems in that movie. But that movie was something. It was good to watch it for one time in my life, I think.

Essay Draft; Kumamoto Zoo

I decided to write about Kumamoto Zoo.

Kumamoto Zoo

Introduction
par1. Location of the zoo
(maybe price, too)
par2. there are 4 kinds of stuff there.
(animals, amusements, plants, restaurants and souvenir shop)

Body
par3. one recommendation of animals
(maybe talk about touch island, too)
par4. one recommendation of amusement
(new one; Chain tower or Disko)
par5. one recommendation of plants
(greenhouse; there are so many butterflies, little river-beautiful!)
par6. talk about souvenir shop
(introduce some original snacks or stuffed animals)

Conclusion
par7. What I think about the zoo
(I live near that zoo, so I go there least once a yr,
Almost all kids go there for picnic from school; everyone knows there,
Elderly ppl, young kids can enjoy there, they are getting new stuff recently→even we (young people) can enjoy
it’s small but nice and relaxing place)